I´m very happy because I have become a new member of a great music band called"la Lira de Pozuelo".It is located in Pozuelo, a village very close to Madrid.The first concert where I´m goin to play my clarinet is for Santa Cecilia.Here you have a vídeo o that band in a concert.They are playing a pasodoble called Morante de la Puebla.
Enjoy!!!
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Hey Ramon, congratulations!!
Let me highlight just a couple of things:
"great band of music" --> "a great music band"
"colled" should be "called"
"the first concert WERE" --> "WHERE"
"They a pasodoble colled" --> They ARE PLAYING a pasodoble CALLED..."
* After a period or a comma leave a space before you continue the sentence: "Pozuelo,a village" --> "Pozuelo, a village"
* Remember to start your sentences with capital letter.
Way to go Ramon!
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